Week 10

I have finally completed my animatic with a preliminary sound design, in hope that it finally makes sense. I would have liked to extinguish the narration, though feedback from various fresh eyes tells me that they don’t understand it without some explanation. I hope though, I have managed to dominate it with visuals, and one is not seeing and hearing the same thing.

The main feedback I desire from this week’s crit is how understandable and effective the story is, and is there fluidity in artistic style.

There’s a problem – nearly 5 minutes!!!!? Is this ok? Is it even possible in the short time I have?


I was going all out, doing primary research though actually it wasn’t doing my film any help. Alternatively, I found great inspiration and crafting Mughal style set design from my Pinterest boards.

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I sought great inspiration from these images:



…And the ‘Powerpuff Girls’ Concepts…


My main influences still rely on ‘The Stain’ and ‘Ubu’.

Initial sketches:










design 2


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